I think that this is amazingly done. Overall I adore the outfit. I think that the colors fit the character amazingly well. Not to mention it is this kinda sexy, but tomboyish outfit in a way. Her eyes are very well done. I love the coloring and the white in them. The band around her head is very well done and very cute ^^. Now the hair. I'm very impressed with the hair in this one. It is very well done and the highlights bring it to life. So Overall I love this piece of work. I think you did an amazing job.
If a deviant asked a question like =mishihime's, where you don't always know the answer since you didn't make the line art, then you can tell them to ask me on the line art or my version of the coloring. That way you don't have to try to answer questions when you aren't certain what the answer is.